Again, very nice, with helpful words and constructions for reading and writing.  A couple points.

1.  The vocabulary list on the right is "off by one"...when you mistranslate the 呢。

2.  Perhaps inadvertently, the essay gives us practice in identifying and using various prepositions, which always bedevil English learners of Chinese-- 给，与，对， 和。  Just think, she doesn't even use 向 and 跟！