First, thanks so much for posting these. I'm hoping you can help me with some variation in interpretation. Basically, are these translations also correct or too far removed from the original?

I was wondering if:

谁从草地上走过//
丢了那么多的珍珠: 

"Who came from the meadow //
leaving behind so many pearls";

Likewise,

谁在草丛中看着我: "Who watched me from the underbrush"

太阳升高//
谁收走了珍珠: 

In context could it be: "As the sun rises//
who took (is taking) the pearls?"

留下了湿湿的气息，//
湿湿的泥土:

"Leaving behind dewy breath// 
and wet soil"



Thanks again!